haiku for you two
“Family” member leaves us
Celebrating sad event
Cake is very good.
Haiku’s are fun. Sad to see you “leave”, Eliz.
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I’m okay with breaking the 5-7-5 haiku rule. Also, I’m a teensy bit anal. So, I’m wondering if the number of syllables in the first line is on purpose. That’s all.
Picky, so picky
Rules should often be broken
Give the girl a beer. -
Good point, I’m an idiot. Lemme rephrase…how about:
ESHA friend says “good bye”
Celebrating sad event
Cake is very good. -
Closer.
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OK. No more Haiku’s for me. Seems I can’t figure out syllables on my own.
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Oh gawd. I tOtally suck. No, no. Please, PLEASE write more haiku. They’re coo, like yu.
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ESHA friend says “Bye”
Celebrating sad event
Cake is very good -
Pat can’t seem to count
Jill enjoys pointing this out
M saves the day, yeah! -
Fumbling amateurs
full of awful poetry
Josh is the master -
ok that’s enough
now the gloves will come off
M wears a red dress -
Man I’m the idiot now… where’s the edit button.
edit:
ok that’s enough
now the gloves drop to the floor
M wears a red dress -
hello? anyone there?
dust blows silently around the room
Josh’s blog is dead -
Were I a fighter,
I may tease Josh about his
Stature, or lack of. -
M can’t count now, too
It seems to be catching on
Dead my blog is not -
People ganging up
I must try to resist them
Val is on my list -
Look what I started
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